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If Ever You'd Met Me  by Linaewen 4 Review(s)
TariReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/15/2011
Carved Oliphaunts, how cute. They will always be a reminder of the Felloships and the friendships they formed.

eilujReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/16/2011
I love seeing the four, post-Quest, in a happy time.

Could there be a line missing before "Pippin looked at them crossly"? It doesn't seem to follow the preceding paragraph.

You don't quite say, but I like to think that Boromir's obsession with carving mūmakil was such that he did more than one set, and that Faramir still retains a whole herd for his children to play with.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/16/2011
That's such a nice scene. A lovely balance of wistful looking back, and looking ahead with cheer.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/16/2011
A wonderful memorial of their journey and of Boromir as well. Love the idea that both Sam and Boromir were fascinated by the oliphaunts!

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