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Stillness  by Linda Hoyland 4 Review(s)
Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/23/2011
Lovely portrayal of Eldarion; and a good lesson for him in the art of patience...

Author Reply: Thank you, I'm pleased you enjoyed this glimpse of Eldarion and his father.

DarkoverReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/21/2011
Dear Linda: A new LotR story, authored by you, is always a treat, and this one did not disappoint. Eldarion learned that lessons sometimes have more than one purpose, and Elessar managed to teach his son an important lesson without resorting to punishment. I liked the father-son relationship as you have portrayed it in this story, and as always, I enjoyed your writing--especially lines such as; "'Can I kill one?' Eldarion asked with the bloodthirsty gusto typical of the young." Very good! Thank you for writing and posting this. Sincerely, Darkover

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm delighted you enjoyed my story and honoured that you feel a new story is a "treat"!I always enjoy writing abour Aragorn and Eldarion.

eilujReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/21/2011
And every one was Quenya. Brilliant!

Author Reply: Thank you. I'm pleased you enjoyed this.

TeresaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/21/2011
Chuckles......Aragorn definately understood how to motivate his son! He was an excellent teacher! And no doubt that lesson also came in handy where Eldarion started attending Council meetings! Thanks for the vignette! :)

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review and for telling me you enjoyed my story. I'm pleased I made you smile.I'm sure his father's teaching will serve Eldarion well throughout his life.

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