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| False Faces by Alisha B | 4 Review(s) |
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| Timmy2222 | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 8/9/2004 |
| HA! I love these turns! Now, on the other hand, I was right that the young man is not dead, but the twist was very well done. Aragorn appears a little bit too light-hearted and easy-going for the ordeal that lies behind him. I would not suppose him to make small talk just to distract the men from his ancestry. - T. | |
| Rinn | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 1/21/2004 |
| Wow! I loved what you did with Aragorn's healing. It was very well written with great description. Hopefully Aragorn will be back to his normal self after this, although I'm interested to see if you write in any side effects... Also, I'm sure Felnorvard will show himself again... that should be fun. Maybe I'm getting ahead of myself. *g* Guess I'll have to wait and find out! Keep up the good work! | |
| Kathira | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 1/15/2004 |
| I hate to be like the repetitive, silly, chirping reviewers on ff.net, but this is really good. Please continue! I like the way you are handling the change in Aragorn's feelings and attitude, nice and subtle, such that although it's obvious to others, he doesn't realize it himself. It's good to see the twins also, especially in their role as healers. I also like the combination of medical and mental practice in healing and diagnosis. Overall, the story is very well done, suspenseful and interesting. I encourage you to continue writing generally, original fiction as well as fan fiction. You could easily be published professionally. | |
| luinthien | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 1/15/2004 |
| Sorry that it has been so long since I have reviewed. I have been enjoying the story very much!! You are a great writer and I can't wait until the next chapter. I see a lot of angst ahead for poor Aragorn. Thank goodness his brothers are there for him. Keep up the good work!! | |