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The Unspoken by Elfique | 10 Review(s) |
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Adonnen Estenniel | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/7/2011 |
What a beautiful and haunting way to end things. This is a fantastic piece; I love how it looks at the situation from a different perspective with such delicacy and poignancy. Very, very, nice. Author Reply: I'd just like to say thank you very much for all your reviews of this, they were all so thoughtful and they were such a nice thing to read heading into the weekend! I'm glad you enjoyed this so much :) | |
Adonnen Estenniel | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/7/2011 |
How sad. Glorfindel's awkwardness around Aredhel is so different than what normally comes to mind. It gives him a human aspect, I think. Lovely, as always! | |
Adonnen Estenniel | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/7/2011 |
This was sweet! The image of him unobtrusively humming her to sleep is very touching, and his evident concern for her is wonderful. | |
Adonnen Estenniel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/7/2011 |
You did an excellent job with contrasting Aredhel's character here. The bold Elf-maid and the collected Elf-lady were delightful in their juxtaposition. Glorfindel's reactions were excellent and interesting as well. | |
Adonnen Estenniel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/7/2011 |
You did an excellent job with contrasting Aredhel's character here. The bold Elf-maid and the collected Elf-lady were delightful in their juxtaposition. Glorfindel's reactions were excellent and interesting as well. | |
Adonnen Estenniel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/7/2011 |
This was beautiful. I loved the style and emotion of the writing, and the simple narration. It really gave depth to the characters and their current situation. Wonderful. | |
Laikwalâssê | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 4/7/2011 |
I liked this five vignettes very much. Poor Glorfindel but who knows for what is was good in the end? Thank you for sharing this with us. Lai Author Reply: Thanks very much for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed reading this! | |
Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/16/2011 |
She has certainly fired his imagination, or so I would say! Hah! Love it! Author Reply: Thanks for the reviews (Bit behind on replying as usual!) I'm glad you're enjoying this so far :) | |
Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/23/2010 |
And his heart once given is never free again? Alas for what might have been.... | |
eiluj | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/20/2010 |
Oh my. This can't end well.... Author Reply: Thanks for your review... and no it can't really can it! :( | |