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Last Gasp  by Elfique 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/27/2010
A terrible choice to make, but at least it is an end to the years of enslavement to his father's oath! Well done!

Author Reply: Thanks very much for the review!

FiondilReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/26/2010
Very powerful, Elfique. It must have been both a torment and a relief for Maedhros to do what he did in the end. One can only pity him for what he allowed himself to become and mourn for the Elf he could have been.

Author Reply: thanks very much for the review, I'm glad it worked for you. There were so many things I felt I had to fit in it was a bit worrying things would get lost in a jumble... but it appears it worked out ok!

EllynnReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/26/2010
Very poignant! Well done.

Author Reply: Thanks very much, glad you enjoyed reading :)

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