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Things That Have Not Yet Come to Pass  by Levade 4 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/2/2010
A tragic tale, leaving one wondering who this particular houseless one was, and how it ended up in that valley. But at least they didn't totally lose her, even if she did end up having to leave Middle Earth.

FantasiaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/1/2010
Wow, this is one of the LOTR scariest stories that I've ever read. Great writing!

Author Reply: Thank you so much! I was definitely trying for the shivery feeling. :)

Erulisse (one L)Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/1/2010
OMG - spooky, thorough, heart-felt, wonderful. I loved this story - perfect for All Hallows Eve. Too few stories deal with the unhoused, and having one linger in the area where the orcs resided only makes sense. Thanks for making my Halloween more perfect.

- Erulisse (one L)

Author Reply: Unhoused and Halloween just seemed to go hand-in-hand. :) Thank you so much!

BeeGeeReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/31/2010
Whew! This was very very creepy! VERY Creepy! Good pacing, excellent characterization, and I like the little twist there at the end, where ugly dolly is still in situ. They need to put that thing in the fire. Poor Lindir! No wonder Galadriel and Celeborn didn't want to visit, if she was forewarned by her mirror. Well written, gave me chills.

Author Reply: I was worried I was going to get yelled at for killing Lindir, but I do like him! And yes, the doll needs to GO. Thank you so much! :)

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