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The Birthday Guest  by Primsong 2 Review(s)
DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/20/2010
Oh, I just love the irony of that last paragraph! You captured so perfectly the insularity of many hobbits.

It makes me wonder who-- the bit about the gold and treasure makes me think "maybe a Proudfoot"? After all, it was Sancho who went digging about in Frodo's cellar. Or the disrespectful tone makes me wonder if it could have been a Sandyman?

Who knows? This is very well done!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/20/2010
Ah, a perfectly awful guest--could well be old Odo Proudroot as I envision him. Heh! Filled with envy and deceit and incredulity. Well done!

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