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Tears on the Battlefield  by Alassante 8 Review(s)
Lizzy50Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/22/2023
This is hilarious! I love it!valar

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/3/2010
It is said that madness is hereditary, but that we get it from our children....

Nice illustration of that principle!

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/23/2010
Oh, this is all too funny; especially the reference of the crusty First Age guys to Legolas as the "Ai, A Balrog" whiner in Moria.

And will Feanor get in touch with his inner child, or get a thumping from Fingolfin?

Love it!

Author Reply: I'm a little afraid of what Feanor's inner child would be like lol I doubt he's ever been too sweet of a guy.

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/23/2010
Aw! I can't stop laughing!!! "Are you crying?" There's no crying in battle!" Now where did I here that before?? Thanks for the wonderful laugh today! Hugs The Imp

Author Reply: Shamelessly stole from Tom Hank's mouth! Glad you got a laugh out of it!

6336Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/23/2010
Sounds like a severe case of pre-battle nerves, once the fighting starts they will be the deadliest bunch of you-know-whats you have ever seen!
Liked it,
More please,
Lynda

Author Reply: If you like my crackpot humor on this - you might like my Singing Silmarils drabbles lol

Thanks!

ShemyazaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/23/2010
I think your story has only just proved to me that I probably wouldn't follow any of them to the toilet, never mind into battle!

Only kidding, as a former soldier of eleven years who has seen action, they sounded just like any bunch of soldiers getting ready to go into action. Bad humour, ripping the crap out of each other and making with the insults.

Yep, pretty much like any soldier I've ever known...including myself!

Author Reply: Oh I don't know. Following them to a bar might be entertaining :) I can only imagine seven brothers, especially the seven plagues of Feanor, would be the type to rag on each other all the time.

Midnight PromiseReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/22/2010
Uh-huh, that was supposed to be "much". .. I really need to stop reading/reviewing when its late at night. -_-

Again, good job. :)

Author Reply: Much or mush - glad I made you laugh :)

Thanks!

Midnight PromiseReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/22/2010
I just found myself snickering the whole time I read this - a mush needed laugh, so thank you. :)

Haha! Ending was perfect - loved it! In other words, please write more? :D

Hope everything is going great!

--Midnight Promise

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