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Face of the Enemy  by Linaewen 2 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/22/2011
I rejoice she has so good a chaperone. And the Wicked sounds as if he has earned his title honestly enough!

TariReviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/11/2010
Akhbaas seems a little too sure of himself as far as I am concerned. That could very well lead to his undoing. (One can only hope.) I like the way you've brought the Southrons into your story. It gives an insite as to where they might be coming from. I hope Heera survives the battle, although the innocent always suffer the most.

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