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| Revelation by WendWriter | 5 Review(s) |
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| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/12/2009 |
| Poor Aragorn, it is very hard for anyone to be unsure of their lineage.You have made me wonder just how many times he must have wondered all sorts of things. Author Reply: Thanks. I wanted to explain how it was that Aragorn distinguished himself enough to impress Elrond. Of course, it had to get all complicated... Thanks again for your review. | |
| Linda Hoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/8/2009 |
| A very exciting chapter. Young Aragorn is brave. I'm glad there are no trolls lurking round here! Author Reply: Thanks, Linda. I had great fun writing this! :D | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/7/2009 |
“Aragorn son of Arathorn,” said Estel, locked in wonderment. Surely this was a dream. At any moment, he would wake up and be Estel, who lived in Rivendell as a foster son of Elrond. “And I am the last of your brother's line.” “There are Men who can claim kinship to him, and one now sits on the throne of Gondor,” said Elrond. “But you have the greater right, for your line is unbroken from the days of Arvedui. The line of Eärnur ended with his death.” Did Tolkien say definitely that Aragorn was the last descendant of Elros? I thought he was the last of Isildur's line, but not necessarily the last descendant of Elros (who are probably quite a good-sized number from various younger sons and female descendants at least). Also, the Steward of Gondor (I think it was Ecthelion at this time) does not sit on the throne, they sit on the Steward's Chair beneath it; it seems to have been a point of pride at least with Denethor. Quibbles aside, this is a nice version of the great scene that Tolkien never wrote. Excellent ending, too! Author Reply: You're right, of course, but I was working with the idea that they were talking about direct father-to-son descendants from the line of kings. Denethor, for example, was also a descendant of Elros, but a minor one. Technically, he was in line to the throne, but some of the other Numenoreans may well have had a stronger claim. You're also right about the throne. Technically, Denethor was the Steward and could only sit on the lower chair, but factually, he was in charge, whatever he was sitting on. His opposition to the return of the king meant that he was blocking Aragorn's ascension, and that was what I meant. I should have put author notes in to that effect - thanks for pointing this out. I'll do it now. Thanks for helping me improve - I love concrit. :D | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/7/2009 |
| I love the way Estel is so boyishly eager to slay monsters at the beginning; and is visibly more mature by the end of the chapter, after he's learned a bit more about the warrior's life he is entering. Author Reply: I love to delve into the psyches of my characters. Thanks for your review. :D | |
| Virtuella | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/4/2009 |
| This is a great gap filler. It tell us what we already know, more or less, but fills in the details so smoothly and convincingly that the story feels fresh and new. Author Reply: Thanks, dear. I must return the compliment. I feel all happy and fuzzy ATM. You guys are lovely. :D | |