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The Plum Tree  by Golden 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/11/2009
(And the next chapter is blank for me as well. Odd!)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/11/2009
It does sound an awful nightmare, and we do wonder where he is, and why he wishes to be with Merry or Frodo, and who has been terrorizing whom in his dream.

demeter dReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 10/29/2009
Oh, my! What an atmospheric and exciting beginning! I am guessing that this may be a young, pre-Quest Pippin; Merry is in Buckland and Frodo is at Bag End. But Pippin is also not "home". Veeery interesting! The night "ruled by the pale moon" sounds cold! But you know, "his grasp"... sounds like Pippin is the one doing the terrorizing to something he holds. I will be looking for your next chapter! (By the way, it looks like the one you tried to post with this chapter did not work yet.)

Author Reply: Heya, thanks for the review. :)
I have no idea whats wrong with Chapter 1....posted it again...can you open it now? I can open it fine, but for me it also worked before. Strange.

Golden

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