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Goldilocks and the Three Balrogs  by Clodia 16 Review(s)
mystarlightReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 4/22/2019
Brilliantly crafted plot. Thank you!!!

mystarlightReviewed Chapter: 3 on 4/22/2019
Glorfindel's speech made me hold my breath!!!

mystarlightReviewed Chapter: 2 on 4/22/2019
I love the way you presented Glorfindel's feelings. Characters are great and I am only worried that story will be ended soon.

mystarlightReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/22/2019
Wonderful story thank you for sharing.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 11/7/2010
A slow coming-back, as he learns to live again, finding a place for both past and present. And his healing continues as he marries history and future, and learns the nature of the world he has reentered.

Most interesting!

Author Reply: That's precisely what I wanted to intend here, so your comment is so lovely to hear. Thank you once again!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/6/2010
Now, that WOULD be quite the thing to find there, in Elrond's house! An excellent test!

Author Reply: Heh, I'm glad you found it so! And glad again that you took the time to leave a comment, thank you!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/5/2010
Aha! Now we are actually beginning to come to know our companions. And Olorin has continued to fail to give anyone a name by which to know him. Most interesting!

Author Reply: Heh, I'm glad you find it so! Thank you again!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/5/2010
It does so appear he has a good deal of acculturization to still go through. But he is in the best of hands at the moment. And Saruman sounds the officious jerk he proves himself in the end.

Author Reply: Yes indeed, there's a long journey ahead of Glorfindel and that not just on the road. I'm glad Saruman's voice rings true!

EllieReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/13/2009
I'm enjoying this story so far. Nicely done and what a great exploration of Glorfy's first few weeks back in Middle-earth.

Author Reply: It's wonderful to hear you're enjoying the story. Thank you for reading and commenting! I hope the rest of it doesn't disappoint. ^^

utfrogReviewed Chapter: Epilogue on 10/9/2009
Excellent story, but now you have to write the children's story! Am delighted to find your other Erestor stories which I am also enjoying. You are a skilled writer with good stories to tell. I know how hard it is to write and deeply appreciate your skill and willingness to share.

Author Reply: ^^ Thank you so much for such a kind comment! I am glad you're enjoying my stories. I actually have written the children's story, although I'm not sure whether I'll post it here; it can be found on my LJ or my FFN account though.

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