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The Standoff by Elvensong | 1 Review(s) |
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Lera | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/18/2003 |
That was funny. I liked seeing the memories. However, the story was really hard to read and I couldn't always tell who saying or thinking what. Paragrapths would be greatly appreciated. | |