Good to see him awake again. I can't help wondering what was damaged in his head that kept him unconscious for so long, and what damage remains that hasn't shown itself yet. I do like the fact that you had everyone understand what remaining unconscious so long meant. Too many stories have characters lose consciousness and then reawaken at a convenient time with no ill effects and no one around them really worried!
Author Reply: yes finally he´s awake. Thank you for the praise. I would go mad with worry for some-one unconscious for so long. Hopefully no bad effects will linger. Thank you for the time to review and follow the story for so long. Only one chapter to go and an epilog. Lai. |
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