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Too Few Winters  by Shireling 5 Review(s)
cathleenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/23/2009
Intriguing beginning to this tale, Shireling! I love the descriptive "word painting" you've done, and am very curious about who the child is.

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/20/2009
Poor boy,what a dreadful ordeal,no wonder he is so traumatised!Very well written.

Author Reply: Thank you, Linda

Yes, he is another tragic victim of the battle.

Helen

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/19/2009
An excellent beginning. Love the premise and how Legolas found his quarry. The poor boy, feeling so guilty!

Author Reply: Thank you, Larner

I really appreciate your feedback.

Hugs

Helen

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/17/2009
What a beautiful, sorrowful tale. The poor little boy. My heart goes out to him. I hope Legolas can offer him some peace....

Author Reply: Thank you so much

I thought this was going to be a story about Eomer but the muse shot of in another direction and poor Eomer barely gets a mention!

Hugs

Helen

MP brennanReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/17/2009
Very impressive story!
I love the imagery you've used, and the haunting language. You really pull your readers in. The boy is enough to break my heart. Excellent writing. I'm looking forward to more.
-Brennan

Author Reply: Thank you for your kind words, Brennan, I really appreciate it. More of the boy's tale soon

Helen


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