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It  by White Wolf 3 Review(s)
Sulwing of MirkwoodReviewed Chapter: 13 on 11/12/2009
eewwwwwww. It licked him! ick ick ick. Snakes don't normally freak me out, but a big snake chasing me around, biting at me and LICKING me is just disgusting. ick. ;)

Yay Aragorn! Snake got a little too close that time! :) But...still in cave, snake planning who knows what, Legolas in very bad shape. Lots of fun coming up!

Author Reply: Yes, it most certainly did. I was grimacing while I wrote that part. I think it's safe to say that Aragorn probably feels exactly the same way.

You summed that up pretty nicely. I do believe I see some 'fun' heading in our direction.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 13 on 11/12/2009
Next time he might try for the eye, I suppose.

Good planning. Now to do what he can for Legolas.

Author Reply: I think he just reacted. The tongue was the offending object, so it got the knife.

I agree on both counts. The elf definitely needs tending to.

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 13 on 11/7/2009
What a narrow escape! And I'm not punning on the size of the cave entrance!

The slimy tongue would have freaked me out. Thank Eru that Aragorn is braver.

Author Reply: Well, hello. I haven't heard from you in a long time. Welcome back.

It was a narrow escape. Punning is acceptable, since it's true both literally and figuratively.

Yuck. That slimy tongue would have definitely freaked me out, as well. Luckily, Aragorn is braver than both of us.


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