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It  by White Wolf 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 11 on 10/10/2009
Oh, dear--can they meet, now? Aragorn is doing his bit, but Legolas is unwittingly moving away from him? At least the snake's poisin doesn't appear particularly potent.

Author Reply: Good question. Poor Legolas doesn't know Aragorn is coming. I think he just wants to get away from where the snake left him, in case it comes back. Legolas will wonder about that, too, I bet. ;O)

Sulwing of MirkwoodReviewed Chapter: 11 on 10/2/2009
:) ...Hi...I'm back.

I have been reeeaalllly busy lately, so please forgive me! But It was the first story I read when I had the time! :)

I almost forgot that the sun could actually come out, they had been running around in the dark for so long.

Anyway. Legolas, stop worrying so much about Aragorn and sit STILL. He is coming to you. And it won't be of much help in any circumstance if you puncture your lungs. Not to mention I'm a little scared that you could have been poisoned. So just stop moving.

Aragorn, HURRY UP!

If the snake sees Legolas again, well, what with the state he's in, they will be IN VERY BIG TROUBLE. AGAIN. Incidentally, I can't see that the horses will be much help now either. It would be very dangerous for Legolas to bounce around on one of them at this time.

So, how do they get out of this one? :)



Author Reply: Good to hear from you. Thank you for coming back and reading this.

I know they were happy to see the sun. (It's been raining for so long where I live, I'd love to see the sun again, as well.)

Legolas doesn't know if Aragorn is able to come after him. Also, he's afraid to stay put and risk the snake finding him.

I think VERY BIG TROUBLE is an understatement should the snake find Legolas again. Can you say DINNER? Not only would horse-bouncing be bad, though it would be preferable to being eaten, but I don't think the horses could even reach our guys at the moment.

That's the million dollar question. We'll have to wait and see. :O)


LarnerReviewed Chapter: 11 on 9/10/2009
Hopefully it is mistaken about "dinner waiting." I hope it is a good long time before it eats again--how about never? Heh!

Author Reply: I think It may be mistaken, since Legolas is on the move, though not very fast and probably not very far. Oh yes. I like that idea very much. Now, if only the snake will cooperate.

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