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It  by White Wolf 3 Review(s)
sofia BaraklilisReviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/30/2009
well, that snake just won't LET UP. I'm glad they made it out of the tunnels- things down there were looking repetitive and grim. My hope now is that the horses are nearby and they can get on them like Legolas does in the Two Towers movie...

Author Reply: No, I don't see that happening. I agree with you, and that's why L & A are now free of the tunnels and the tower, not the snake, however.

We'll have to wait and see if the horses can be of assistance. Maybe so, maybe not. :o) I liked that elf-mounting-horse bit, too. Isn't CGI wonderful?


Sulwing of MirkwoodReviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/29/2009
It just won't give up, will It? I hope the horses are close by still.
It made me laugh when Legolas was explaining the difficulties of killing the snake with an arrow. (Incidentally, where is a snake's brain?) :) "Alright, I get the point." Poor guys. And then the door wouldn't open right away. Again, that would have been too easy.
Finally, I like your reference to the "I'm fine" line. I think Legolas and Aragorn have a copyright on that by now. They own it. ;)
Keep writing! :)

Author Reply: No, I don't think that's in It's nature. They would certainly be a big help and possibly life savers.

Glad you got a laugh out of that bit. (I've done research on snakes, but to be honest, I've never found any description of the exact location of a snake's brain. I assume it's in the center, protected by their bony skull.)

Yes indeed, that would have been too easy, and L & A don't do easy. If they don't have a copyright on that line, they should apply for one. :o)

I will!


LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/25/2009
Getting out of the enclosed space helps, as it gives them more options and more distractions for the snake as it may now come into contact with other possible prey that could distract it.

At least they got out in time! Now, to see how it reacts now it is free of the dungeons.

Author Reply: It would sure help me! :o) It does give them options, but I'm not sure the snake will anything, even other prey, distract it.

Indeed they did. I think time was running out for them where they were. We'll have to see how single-minded the snake turns out to be.

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