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Pebbles From Arda  by Virtuella 5 Review(s)
curiouswombatReviewed Chapter: 18 on 8/15/2015
What a lovely glimpse of a summer day - both the picture and the story, which fit together perfectly.

Author Reply: Thank you!

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 18 on 8/14/2015
Thank you so much, I just love this and it is wonderful to see my photo inspire a story I can read and enjoy. Love your young Boromir and Faramir.

Author Reply: Glad you liked it!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 18 on 8/14/2015
Oh, but how beautiful and perfect, Virtuella! I love the imagery, and that in the end Boromir found himself content enough to remain a boy while he still could. The tickling of the grass--I've felt that so often myself, and love the question as to whether the cygnets feel much the same. Delightful! And hail, Scotland!

Author Reply: Thank you. Scotland didn't come into it this time, though, the inspiration came from Cheshire.

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 18 on 8/14/2015
Wonderfully done.

So much subtle revelation of the character they will grow into.

And the foreshadowing...

Author Reply: Thank you!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 18 on 8/14/2015
like girls, like boys, like children.

Perfect. This is a wonderful tale.

Author Reply: Thank you!

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