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Weathertop  by Primsong 3 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/10/2008
Wow - the hands of the king - I love you bringing that in! It gives such meaning to the Houses of Healing chapter!

One little quibble - should my blad burn be my blade burns?

Excellent poem.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/9/2008
Angmar had little understanding of what strength this odd mortal held, and how the Ring unwittingly aided him to defy the will of Mordor.

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/9/2008
The hands of the king are the hands of death.

That is such a brilliant use of that phrase, turning the original context on its head and so bringing out the contrast: Aragorn was the opposite of Angmar in every way!

And "our treasure" is shuddersome in this context...

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