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Weathertop  by Primsong 3 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/10/2008
Oh my goodness! Utter terror! You've captured it well.

What I love most is the 3rd stanza... not only for the words, but for the formatting... it carries the 'feel' of the poem into new depths!

Great job!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/9/2008
Wonderful expression of Frodo's feelings here. It did take him here, after all--almost fully.

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/9/2008
You have captured his terror here, and his defiance, even as he's beginning to feel that defying is useless...

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