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Weathertop  by Primsong 3 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/10/2008
As always, your poetry astounds me! The sense of evil, doom, and utter darkness pervades.

Very well done!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/9/2008
The scene is well set. A grim foreboding has been shown.

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/9/2008
Oh, this evokes the horror of the place so very well!

I especially like these lines:

Fading sun
In setting, pulling down
The last shredded remnants of peace.
Shivering innocence curls around its impotent fire,


as we see the darkness falling there...

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