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| Weathertop by Primsong | 18 Review(s) |
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| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/10/2008 |
| Any with any compassion had to just about die at this scene... You capture it very well.... But all of you are are lost to me in this unreality - typo? | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/10/2008 |
| It must have been hideous for Sam - first to 'lose' his Master and friend as Frodo puts the Ring on - and then to know that, in the end, he might lose him altogether.... | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/10/2008 |
| Wow - the hands of the king - I love you bringing that in! It gives such meaning to the Houses of Healing chapter! One little quibble - should my blad burn be my blade burns? Excellent poem. | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/10/2008 |
| Yikes! *shivers* Incredibly well done... I love the last line. | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/10/2008 |
| Oh my goodness! Utter terror! You've captured it well. What I love most is the 3rd stanza... not only for the words, but for the formatting... it carries the 'feel' of the poem into new depths! Great job! | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/10/2008 |
| As always, your poetry astounds me! The sense of evil, doom, and utter darkness pervades. Very well done! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 6/9/2008 |
| The words crumble away even as he sees himself boing to ice's ash. Excellent series, Primsong. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 5 on 6/9/2008 |
| Excellent contrast of the two views of what is happening. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/9/2008 |
| Angmar had little understanding of what strength this odd mortal held, and how the Ring unwittingly aided him to defy the will of Mordor. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/9/2008 |
| And It took him.... | |