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I give you a rainbow  by Golden 14 Review(s)
harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/8/2008
This is really lovely Golden. I love your descriptions of colours.

Author Reply: Thanks for reading and the nice review harrowcat! :)

aliensouldreamReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/8/2008
That was so lovely and a very thoughtful tale. Pippin is very inventive and playful and full of kindness.

Author Reply: Yes, that he is! Thank you for reading Aliensouldream! :)

julchen11Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/8/2008
What a wonderful and heartwarming story. The beauty of your words made me weep, my dear. Thank you for this wonderful treasure.

Love and hugs,
Julchen

Author Reply: *blush* Thank you for this very nice review Julchen! :)

Addie71Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/8/2008
This was a delightful story. I love Pippin's thoughtfulness and ingenuity in helping Evergreen to understand about colors.

Author Reply: Thank you Addie! Glad you liked it! :)

RhyselleReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/8/2008
*sniffle* Oh, this was so very very beautiful.

I'm on my way to church, but I just had to tell you how very much I liked it! It's going on my favorites list for certain!

Author Reply: Thank you so much for this nice comment, Rhyselle. I am happy you liked the story that much! :)

cathleenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/7/2008
Golden - This is wonderful! I love the way you have shown Pippin as such a tender-hearted lad. Very sweet, and very well conceived story!

Cathleen

Author Reply: Thank you Cathleen! I am glad you liked it! :)
Speak to you soon! :D

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/7/2008
Das war wunderschön, Golden!

Pippin ist sehr kreativ, wenn es darum geht, Farben zu beschreiben. Und er brauchte nur eine kurze Bedenkpause, um sich in Evergreen hineinzuversetzen. Mancher Erwachsene hätte auf eine solche Frage keine Antwort gefunden!

Und der "Regenbogen"-Blumenstrauß war eine großartige Idee :)

P.S.: Schön, dass auch noch andere Leser die "German Version" mitverfolgen. Denn Deutsch ist eigentlich eine schöne Sprache, nur wahrscheinlich schwieriger zu erlernen als Englisch.

Author Reply: Danke Andrea :)

Freut mich das dir Pippins "Farbbilder" gefallen haben und danke, dass du die deutsche Version immer mitverfolgst :) und das dieses mal sogar noch jemand Zweites sie liest ist natürlich auch ganz wondervoll.

LG Golden

Kitt OtterReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/7/2008
Ach, so gut! : ) And the sweetest story I've read in a while... the descriptions are brilliant, from the narration to those by Pippin. I could feel each of the colors; gladly so could Eve. I am impressed by anyone who can write well, especially in more than one language. Wundarbar Geschichte!
-Kitt

Author Reply: Hallo Kitt Otter,

vielen Dank für deine Review. Es freut mich sehr, dass dir die Geschichte gefallen hat.
:)

LG Golden

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/7/2008
That was absolutely lovely. A clever little Hobbit is our Pippin...

Author Reply: *g* He is, isnt´t he? Thanks for reading Agape! :)

Garnet TookReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/7/2008
Oh, Golden, this was just wonderful. What Pippin did was very creative, and so believable. I remember trying to convey the idea of color to friends. We weren't quite as imagitive as Pippin was though. Oh this story just brings back really cool memories for me. Thanks so much for sharing it.

Author Reply: :) I am glad that the story brought back nice memories for you Garnet! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing.

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