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Where Shadows Lay No More  by cathleen 7 Review(s)
VirtuellaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/19/2008
This is a very original take on Boromir and a gentle, conciliatory story. I don't think I ever saw a particular bond between Boromir and the hobbits in the books, but the event showed that he must have cared for them. I liked the double perspective of this, and Boromir's part was very touching.

Something is not quite right with this sentence: "Doubtless they have ever seen the like of it before." I think that should be either "doubtful" or "never seen". Also "as I feel they will have many difficult nights ahead as they recover from their dreadful experiences" seems to have one too many "as"; but one of them could easily be replaced by "for" or "while".

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/17/2008
And we are gladdened to know that Gondor's son rejoices at the new order, and that some he'd come to love see it.

Author Reply: Yes, indeed, those were my thoughts exactly. Thank you so much for your comments!

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/14/2008
A powerful, yet gentle story of the power of love. I love it all. I'm glad Boromir and the hobbits find peace.


Author Reply: Me too, they each deserved to have peace after everything they suffered. I thought a little closure was needed for all of them. Thank you Pearl!!

Esquire_of_RohanReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/14/2008
Wow! That is beautiful!

Author Reply: I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed this, and thank you so much for taking the time to comment on it!

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/14/2008
Awesome...beautifully written. :-) This was a lovely story, very well told, and I enjoyed every word of it. :-) I'm sure Pipkin is elated with this sweet tale!

Author Reply: Thank you so very much for your generous comments, Pippinfan. They mean more to me than you know, I think. I'm so pleased to hear that you liked this, and thanks so much for the MEFA nom!!! What a terrific surprise that was!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/14/2008
What a lovely, gentle 'fare well' from Boromir to "his little ones".

Author Reply: Yes, I can't imagine it having been any other way. Thank you, Shirebound!

ElflingimpReviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/14/2008
Cathleen, that was beautiful and it brought tears to my eyes Hugs Deb

Author Reply: Thank you so much, that is so kind of you to say!

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