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While We Dwelt in Fear  by Pearl Took 3 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/5/2005
Very engrossing. The psychic connection is well written and described.

Beethovens7thReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/26/2004
Most awesome dream sequence. love the way it jumps around and changes oddly just like a real dream.!! (do hobbits dream in color?)((just another silly question of your amuzement.))

Zebra WallpaperReviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/2/2003
Oh, Pearl, I don't know how I got so behind on this story. It seemed to me there was only one chapter I hadn't read yet and now I find there's three!
My apologies for not reading and reviewing sooner, but anyway, now I guess I get to be spoiled and read three in a row :)
And a lovely spoiling it is. This story is just marvelous. The events are very fresh and touch on things I've never seen anyone do before. And Esmeralda is fascinating. I'm so interested to see more of her visions and her connection with M&P. Your portrayal of her is unique and captivating.
Particular to this chapter, too, I have to point out how well done the dream sequence was. It really had that feeling that dreams do and writers are seldom able to capture that. I absolutely felt was Esmeralda was feeling: the dreamy pleasantness, the foreboding and lastlty the horror. Very powerful stuff.

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