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A Sea-Side Evening  by Violin Ghost 4 Review(s)
TanteReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/30/2008
That was utterly charming.

The romantic story in the middle followed by the scene on the beach were beautiful in their timing, atmosphere and effect. My favorite parts.

Well done!

Author Reply: Thank you! :) I'm glad I succeeded in one of my goals, at least (that is, to get the scene and atmosphere just right).

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/28/2008
What a delightful romantic story!

Author Reply: I meant it for Valentine's -- I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/26/2008
Oh, I rather think he has found the best sea treasure of the lot!

Author Reply: And I am quite sure Eomer agrees with you, too. ;)

Thanks for reviewing!

Elena TirielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/25/2008
What a lovely vignette! I enjoyed the story-within-a-story, and was amused by Éomer's surprise that two normal people could have such a romantic love story. And it seems that it opened new ways of thinking for both Éomer and Lothíriel... with very satisfactory results.

Well done!

- Barbara

Author Reply: Thank you, your review really made my day. I AM rather fond of stories-within-stories. :)

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