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The Vase that was Broken  by Linda Hoyland 7 Review(s)
EstelcontarReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/7/2008
Linda, I like the original version a lot, but I like this improved version even better.

Author Reply: Thank you,I'm pleased you like this more polished version.

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/6/2008
Nice tale. I found this little bit priceless... 'The King’s heart was in his mouth when his Queen returned and took her accustomed place in her sitting room. He decided to wait for her to notice the vase before confessing his mishap with her treasured heirloom.'

Author Reply: Thank you,I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/6/2008
Heee! Gotta watch those spoons; they can be lethal weapons, especially in the destruction of vases.

Very funny story. Poor Aragorn, having to examine all those vases and decide on one. A King's work is never done!

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.
I can't imagine Aragorn enjoying choosing vases somehow.
I'm pleased this mused you.

RadbooksReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/6/2008
Very cute... and so very true to life! :)

Author Reply: Thank you, I'm pleased you enjoyed this.It was actually inspired by seeing two adult men(friends since childhod)having a mock battle with wooden spoons when I visited some friends!

Nieriel RainaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/5/2008
Oh I loved this one, Linda. The EE is even better! Great job!

Author Reply: Thank you so much.I'm pleased you enjoyed it.I like going back to the prompts after a few weeks as I can often think of a way of doing it better.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/5/2008
Ah, a wise mother! How wonderful that she'd thought to put the good one away! Heh! Poor Aragorn--all that work apparently for nothing....

Author Reply: I'm pleased you enjoyed this.Welcome back! I hope your new ISP is an improvement for you.I think Aragorn unestimates Arwen at times!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/5/2008
This is adorable, and your title is so clever! :)

Author Reply: Thank you, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it!

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