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Trouble  by Bodkin 18 Review(s)
Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/1/2008
I print out the tales that I want to read most times and you should see the smiley faces all over this one!!!

I smiled at the title 'miscreant' ... over the twins taking a half-step backwards... The nebulous doom... loved the 'several leagues' of her hearing ability... the sharper elbows... Mordor cannot be more dangerous...

All the trouble they went to - you'd think they were going up against a balrog! I was amazed... the punishment fit the crime. *giggles*


paranoidangelReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/13/2008
Oh, Celebrían knows exactly what she's doing with those three. Although I can see their point about wanting to avoid maidens!

obsidianjReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/25/2008
They really have done it this time. Why is it that a few girls seem such a large foe to most young males? And Glorfindel was really no help at all, for none of them. I'm kind of suspicious that he used the twins to get a reprieve from Imladris ;-).

LilandrielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/24/2008
oh, very, very funny!! thank you for a good laugh

i loved the comment about him trying to work out how closely related Celebrian is to Feanor!

Glorfindel really does have 'foot in mouth' syndrome, doesn't he? "It was only a joke,’ he protested, knowing, even as he said the words, that opening his mouth was a mistake."

heehee, lovely fic. are you intending to continue with this? i hope that you do. it has the grounding for a fantastic fic. all of your characters are great!!


J xx

EdlynReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/16/2008
Oh, this was just wonderful! The poor boys (all three of them!) certainly are in a fix aren't they? I havethe biggest grin on my face and will now go finish my lunch in a much better mood than when I woke up this morning. I'm definitely recommending this story to my friends.

Edlyn

6336Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/15/2008
A case of face the music and dance! Poor Guys, hope they enjoy the Havens!
Lynda

ArmarielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/13/2008
Delightful reading, with dialog that is refreshing and pungent. A nice treat for a sunday afternoon.:)

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harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/13/2008
Truly her mother's daughter. Loved every inch of this Bodkin, especially the reference to Lord Namo.

InglorReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/12/2008
I really like this portrayal of Celebrian. Definitely Galadriel's daughter (pricelss Feanor reference).

Entertained, as usual.


elliskaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/12/2008
Oh those foolish males! They could not possibly hope to win against Celebrian! Glorfindel really should know better. ;-) But the garlic was hilarious, and probably quite successful, if you don't count how it was certain to make Celebrian even angrier. This was hilarious!

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