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| A New Light by MarigoldG | 7 Review(s) |
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| PIppinfan1988 | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/19/2009 |
| I just re-read this beautiful poem about Pippin wanting to see the stars in the night sky. I, too, am a stargazer, so I can understand his heart's desire to see them. Loved it all over again! | |
| PIppinfan1988 | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/2/2007 |
| I hope you don't mind if I leave another ocmment... I *adore* the story you give of Pippin yearning to see the sky filled with innumerable stars and then actually seeing them! Brilliant job on your first go at poetry! :-) | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/2/2007 |
| Antane is right about your poetry. Trust yourself and let's see more! I don't suppose that our Queen would do the same for me here but I do miss the stars. | |
| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/2/2007 |
| I love it all but I think my favorite part is the fact that Aragorn saw to it that the entire city dimmed its lights for Pippin so he could see the stars again. I know that everyone enjoyed them but I like the fact that this was done because of something Pippin needed. Beautiful poem! I'm glad you posted it here. | |
| Neilia | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/2/2007 |
| Oh, now this makes my early morning a great beginning. Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. In spite of all the help you may have had, you shine through in this poem. | |
| Antane | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/1/2007 |
| You need not fear you are not a good poet! Very good! Namarie, God bless, Antane :) | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/1/2007 |
| Lovely, Marigold. One thing I love about my current home is that I'm so far away from light polution. Here I can actually see the Little Dipper, which I couldn't see from my childhood home due to too much light from the city, no matter it was ten miles away; and even in my last home there were too many streetlights. I truly feel with Pippin here. | |