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| Shadow by fael bain | 2 Review(s) |
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| Lyn | Reviewed Chapter: 31 on 3/29/2006 |
| I admire your ability to weave a complicated story line. Just one suggestion: "All I see is two friends, one right before me, whom I cannot abandon, and other, lost. Possibly could be improved: "All I see are two friends; one right before me whom I cannot abandon, and another, lost." | |
| Elf messenger | Reviewed Chapter: 31 on 1/22/2004 |
| Ooooooooh, good chapter. I like Legolas' relationship with Elronds family even though his past is sad. Can't wait until you post again!! Namarie. Elf messenger Author Reply: Thanks! I really like Elrond and his family, and thought it would be nice for him to actually have a bit of history with them, since it's such a potential goldmine for well, whatever really! lol I'll try my best to get the next chapter up ASAP! =) | |