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Shadow  by fael bain 2 Review(s)
KarenReviewed Chapter: 61 on 7/3/2006
This story is just fantastic! I love the characterization you've given all the characters from canon, and I like the original characters as well. So was the "young one" of the last chapter Esendri? I'm going to be a coward and wait until the next part is finished before starting it. I really enjoy your writing style. The only thing I've noticed is that sometimes you seem to rephrase a sentence halfway through without getting rid of the last half, or some words get skipped over. Anyway, I hope you keep up the good work.

NessaReviewed Chapter: 61 on 5/26/2006
Hello. I love to read,and I'm an avid fan of Tolkien writings.The stories of Arda is one of my favorite places to read from. I dont usually leave reviews,but,I just wanted you to know how much I enjoyed this story. I would much appreciate it if you would send me an e-mail as to when you have part two,and three to this story.You left me on the edge.*smile*.My name is Linda,and I go by Nessa most places.My e-mail addy is riversheelf@prtcnet.com

Thank you for the great story,and I look forward to the other two.Great job!

Hannon le,mellon nin! Ná Elbereth veria le, ná elenath dín síla erin rád o chuil lín.


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