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Tide of Destiny - Part One: Choices  by Lady Bluejay 3 Review(s)
BodkinReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/4/2008
Elphir's might have learned diplomacy - but Lothiriel certainly hasn't. On the other hand, he might acquire a wife he's not too keen on, but he doesn't risk being sold for Gondor's benefit to a nasty perverted sadist of a man.

And Eomer's coming on well.

Author Reply: Well Lothy is still very young. And I have yet to find Elphir a wife but I am not a cruel person!

Eomer is always well!!LBJ

yanicReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/24/2007
I love the characterization of Lothíriel in this story. She's a bit headstrong, but this only makes her more interesting. Besides, where would the fun be if she didn't go charging off into the night? Thank you for another great chapter!

Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing, Yanic. Something is bound to happen to her!LBJ

AlquawendeReviewed Chapter: 3 on 11/23/2007
I love this so far. I can't wait to find out how Lothiriel fares in her situtation as a runaway, and what's going to happen to Eomer since he's the new commander.

>>Racing a1ong the beach had been absolutely exhilarating, and the best thing she could have done that morning.

Um, you might want to change the 1 in a1ong to along with an l.

Thanks for writing!

Author Reply: Now how did that slip in? *grins*. Thanks for that - duly corrected.
And as for what happens to my favorite two - with any luck not what people expect. Thanks for reading and reviewing, I hope you continue to enjoy.LBJ

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