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The Spirit of Gondor  by Linda Hoyland 5 Review(s)
JastaElfReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/14/2007
What a wonderful story!! I love all the characterizations, but especially two grown men who are able to see to the needs of a little girl who believes she has seen a ghost! You built it all up perfectly; I knew they'd do something, but not this absolutely perfect ending! :) Thank you so much for sharing such a great tale!

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review and welcome to my stories!I'm delighted you enjoyed the story and the way I portrayed the characters. Your kind comments made my day!

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/9/2007
A fine ending Linda. Everyone's blushes spared and a lovely evening spent with loved ones..

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased you enjoyed the story.

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/9/2007
All's well that ends well; with a very satisfying conclusion to this fine Halloween story.

Aragorn and Faramir thought up a wonderful way to liven up the festivities and exonerate Elbeth without damaging Faramir's own reputation. Eowyn is well-written as a compassionate and fair woman who obviously cares deeply for her niece.

Well-done and very atmospheric.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.

I'm pleased you enjoyed this and hope it contained the elements you like.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/9/2007
So, that's how Aragorn solved it, then? Nice resolution. And hopefully Elbeth's fears have been eased.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you liked the resloution.I think Elbeth was more indignant than scared,but she is an unusual child!

eilujReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/8/2007
I very much enjoyed this story.

P.S. Some malign spirit -- playing tricks on you -- has centered the second chapter!

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm delighted you enjoyed the story. Also thank you for telling me about chapter 2.I hope I've fixed it now.

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