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| Song of the Sea by White Wolf | 3 Review(s) |
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| Mairi | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/3/2007 |
| This was a wonderfully written conclusion that I really enjoyed, but, because I believe in giving advice to people in reviews (it drives some crazy) I would say use something other than "once he recovered" in the seventh paragraph. Author Reply: Sorry for the delay in responding. Thank you. I'm glad you liked the conclusion to this story. I don't mind constructive criticism at all. I'll go and reread what you suggested. If I agree, I'll change it. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/24/2007 |
| A wonderful look at the two of them and the best way in which to deal with this malady, and the interactions between these two long-time friends. Author Reply: It was my intention to demonstrate the depth of their friendship, in this case using the sea longing. I believe it did, as much, if not more, than any h/c story I could write. I'm glad that you liked it. | |
| Naledi | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/23/2007 |
| A very thoughtful, sombre take on Legolas' sea-longing. I liked the idea that Legolas could be so absorbed in the sea-longing that he couldn't even hear Aragorn speaking to him and I thought that Legolas' description of how the sea calls to him was beautiful: "It weaves its melody into the rhythm of my heartbeat." Author Reply: I think it's hard to talk about the sea longing and not have a level of somberness in it. I wanted it to be both haunting and spellbinding for Legolas, so it would drown out all other sights, sounds and feelings. I'm glad you liked the way I described it. That's one of my favorite lines and, to me, sums it all up. :o) | |