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Little Ones about Little Ones  by Golden 6 Review(s)
AndreaReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/10/2009
“See that spider web over there?” the dwarf responded. “The raindrops caught in it sparkle like silver does, deep in the mountains, when the light of my lamp shines upon its surface.”

What a wonderful comparison. It's like a link between mountains and forests, and therefore a link between Dwarves and Elves.

I like stories featuring Pippin (and other hobbits) very much, but I also liked this one :)

Author Reply: Thanks Andrea! :) Glad you liked this story too, even without Pippin...but under us... *whispers* .... Geschichten MIT Pippin sind doch die Besten! *G*

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/10/2009
Ah! Told from the POV of one of the more aware trees in Fangorn! Wonderful!

See, you CAN do it, you know--write stories that involve other characters, that is.

Author Reply: I have lots of stories involving other characters :P just besides those other characters there is also always Pip inside..but its not all ONLY Pip stories..I mean he has to interact wirh someone now and then. *g*.
Anyway there just cannot be enough stories with that Hobbit!
Glad you like the story! :)

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/9/2009
Wonderful! I love the POV character, and the descriptions of Legolas and Gimli!

You can write perfectly well without Pippin!

Author Reply: Yeah...but... I WANT to write Pippin!!!!!! :P
Thanks for reading!

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/9/2009
"a chorus of friendship" -- what a wonderful phrase! A lovely little story.

Author Reply: Glad you like the line. :) Thanks for the review!

CeleritasReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/9/2009
Hah! Very well done, my dear--and great PoV!

Author Reply: Thanks! And now are you up for a Challenge? *G*

Pearl TookReviewed Chapter: 16 on 2/9/2009
A charming story! You did an excellent job with the characters and the elements.

Well Done, Golden!

Author Reply: Thanks Pearl! I liked the elements, you gave me. :)

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