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Clear Conscience (The Clear Shot Remix)  by Dreamflower 6 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 8/5/2008
Just rereading this for the MEFAs, and I so wish it HAD gone this way, with both the brothers able to sit by Frodo on the wall in the sunlight, rejoicing that the war was over. Too bad that Denethor still fell to madness, though!

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 8/24/2007
Ah, an intriguing AU! And what a fun idea to do “remixes” of other stories! *sighs, missing “the old days” when I didn’t feel quite so crowded with original work to do much fic*

I love the way everything turned out! Boromir’s remark about Faramir finding more peril than in battle made me laugh, and his conversation with Pippin was very moving. Poor Denethor; I guess it was inevitable if he lived.

I hate I couldn’t follow this while it was in progress; during the time you were posting it, I was frantically trying to figure out what to do about having access to a computer because my poor old thing is dead, never to revive again. Now, to catch up on everything else!
God bless,

LarnerReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 8/21/2007
It would have done so well to have come to this.

Author Reply: It would have; and it would have taken so *very* little to change the shape of the story this way. I am quite sure that if Frodo had overheard Boromir agonizing over his temptation rather than actually confronting him, it would have come out much the same. And then, if somehow the orc archers could have been taken out of the any rate, that was my thought process.

AntaneReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 8/19/2007
Oh, good, a moment's relief for him before the guilt and shame close in again to suffocate him. I hope eventually he will hear those words he addressed to Boromir and realize they also could apply to him. His will was not free at the Fire as he supposes it was and he had to endure that torment of the Ring's temptations much longer. That he caved in under intolerable pressure is something he needs to forgive himself for - perhaps you can do another chapter on that as he and Boromir help each other through their guilt? I think he could talk to Boromir about the Ring in ways he couldn't with anyone else, not even Sam. *tosses carrot to plot bunny*

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Author Reply: I think *in his head* he does know that those words could apply to him; but his heart was so shattered that I think he cannot quite seem to believe it in his heart--his feelings are scraped raw, and not about to yield to logic.

It's possible Boromir could talk to him about it--I don't know, though, if I will be returning to this AU. We shall see what we shall see.

AndreaReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 8/19/2007
“No, Boromir, you could not have stopped your ears, nor your mind. But you were able to keep your heart true--and for that you have a clear conscience.”

How wonderful!

I loved it to see the three of them together after the quest was fulfilled.

If only Frodo would accept that *he* should have a clear conscience as well!

I enjoyed this story a great deal! Thank you very much, Dreamflower!

Author Reply: It was kind of wonderful to me as well. I'd been wanting for a while to try my hand at a "Boromir-lives" AU, and this re-mix gave me the perfect opportunity.

Frodo is very good at giving of his wisdom to others, but he finds it hard to accept it for himself. I think, in his head, he knows he's not to blame, but he finds it far harder to convince his heart.

SurgicalSteelReviewed Chapter: Epilogue 2 on 8/19/2007
Nicely, nicely done!

Author Reply: Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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