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Lothiriel's Journal  by Lady Bluejay 3 Review(s)
inglorReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/12/2007
Just wanted to let you know I am still reading your stuff and still enjoying it.
I really like how you sculpt your stories. Little turns of phrase, a choice word here, a left out word there. Makes for effortless reading yet has eastereggs for those who want to find them.

Author Reply: Mice to hear you are still with me. Thanks for the compliment - I hope to try my hand at a liitle more angst later in the year so will value your opinion.LBJ

Unheard ChimeReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/8/2007
My goodness, I am really afraid of Lothiriel's aunt. Poor Imrahil, growing up with that woman! Is she his older sister or younger? And I feel for Ivriniel's son, I really do.

I like the youthful anticipation in Lothiriel when she thinks about Eomer. In many ways it's so girlish and innocent and naive, but in many ways it isn't. Very nice job.

Author Reply: I have sort of based her reactions on the cloistered daughters of nobility - she needs some excitment in her life. Yes, she is a romantic but luckily she will not be dissapointed.LBJ

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/8/2007
Ah, yes, the TALK. She sounds a proper prude indeed. Glad she doesn't live nearby.

Author Reply: The poor woman gets bad press in so many of these E/L stories - I shall have to write a nice Aunt Irv. sometime.LBJ

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