| Vows by French Pony | 4 Review(s) |
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| perelleth | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 6/8/2007 |
| Yep, confusion and darkness reinforcing each other. What a moment for the Noldor! |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/22/2007 |
| Ah, the grief of it, losing all that had meaning to him to follow his father's words elsewhere, never siring the child he so desired. I grieve for him, and for his eventual fate. |
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| elliska | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/20/2007 |
| You capture the oppressive darkness at the beginning of this chapter very well--how it must have felt to these elves that knew nothing but the beauty of Valinor previously. And you capture the rage of Feanor and the way he kept everyone driven perfectly. I am glad Calimë did not go, because this will only get worse, but how incredibly sad for both of them. |
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| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/15/2007 |
| Man, Feanor has a lot to answer for. |
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