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Vows  by French Pony 5 Review(s)
perellethReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/11/2007
I was laughing at Feanor fretting about NErdanel's impedning arrival and the state their house was in... Itmade me laugh and shiver as well, as I remembered the state I left my own house in when I left the other day!

The married males tradition was very fitting, and the ceremony -and the finery- was lovely. YOu have a great talent for depicting those scenes! And I suppose that MAglor cannot complain at the surprise! :-)

elliskaReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/6/2007
I absolutely burst out laughing at Feanor's frenzy at the impending arrival of relatives. Perhaps I should be ashamed to say that his reaction is exactly what my mother does when visited by certain relatives, and it is exactly what I do when my mother comes to my houde, so seeing Feanor do it just cracked me up! Equally great is Feanor's reaction to the care of his house in Tirion! She is gutsy to tell him!

And of course the one expense for the wedding was a great band! What else is one to expect given the groom (and the author). ;-)

Something about the vow naming Manwe as witness here is quite sad--a very different vow than the one Maglor will soon make, that will undoubtedly tear this one apart.

And the end! Hehehe! Great! Hot blooded First Age elves indeed!

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/6/2007
Well! It seems as if Maglor's foray into married life started well. There wasn't even a punch up at the wedding. And he managed to keep the show to the things that mattered most to him and his bride, which is pretty good going when you've got a whole load of big egos around.

Shame the harmony couldn't last.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/2/2007
Mother and Father are behaving as well as they can under the circumstances, and Calime has already found a manner in which to inflame her new husband! Ah, if only things might have continued on such a warm note indefinitely!

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/1/2007
My, my! Calime is ready for a good time. I wonder if the uncles and cousins warned the groom ahead of time to be on the alert.

Music seems a appropriate way for these two to splurge.

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