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The Memory of Moments  by Peredhil lover 6 Review(s)
Nieriel RainaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 2/10/2008
I really like this one a lot. The rhythm really made it work well. You really captured Elladan's thoughts fabulously. I now blame you for being unable to stop writing twin fics! *grin* Great short!

Author Reply: Thanks, NiRi, I’m glad you like how it turned out in the end. If I am to blame for inspiring you to write twin fics, then I am most pleased with myself! :)

RSReviewed Chapter: 2 on 2/4/2008
How does one get over this? I can feel his anguish and helplessness. You've done such a good job in carrying his state of being over to your other stories. Poor Elladan!

Author Reply:
Thanks so much for reviewing again, RS! I’m glad that I’ve managed to show a little of what Elladan was going through at this time, and how it affected his behaviour in my later stories. I still plan to write one more of these short ficies if I ever get around to it.

peredhil lover

RSReviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/4/2008
Shock and Horror! OMG..The poor twins. This is very distressing.

ellieReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/5/2007
very powerful. full of helplessness and hopelessness. poor elladan! well done

Author Reply: Thanks for reviewing, ellie! I'm glad to know that you found this to be effective.

peredhil lover

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/20/2007
How horrid a thing to find, and reassuring that they have at least found her alive.

And I see I'm joined in another who's chosen that title for a collection of stories. I learned it had been used several times on FFN.

Author Reply: Actually, I wrote this one quite awhile ago and didn't plan to even post it here, but a couple more ideas for short snippets from Elladan's POV just sprang to my mind today. They will tie into the current story I'm writing, so I thought I would throw them together under one title and post them. I didn't give the title too much thought, but since it's already been used a few times, I've changed it.

Thanks for reviewing, Larner.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/20/2007
Poor twins. Poor Celebrian. And Elrond. Again his family is ripped apart - and yet, one way or another, they all survived. And healed. After a fashion.

Author Reply: They did all heal, but despite Elladan's hope at the end, their family never was whole again, was it? The twins fate is a matter of debate, but we do know that at least Arwen never saw her mother again.

It's so sad, and something that I see as a pivotal moment in all their lives.

Thanks for reviewing Bodkin.

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