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The Aftermath  by Elanor Silmariën 9 Review(s)
Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/1/2007
I always think Gandalf could at least have let them wear some soft underwear.Poor Frodo wearing those horrid Orc garments again !

Author Reply: Lol! Yes, that is true, I never even thought of that! How inconsiderate of me. *blushes*
God bless,
Ellie

lotrgirl1415Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/16/2006
YAY!!!I <3 updates!
Especially this one!
Poor Frodo I've always had a special spot for Frodo in my heart since I was 7, and I read the LOTR trilogy with my dad, and have always wished to comfort him and Samwise after all they've been through especially. I love the way you capture them both.


I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. & Still love the Frodo POV.


Lots of love
No galu govad gen

Looking forward to the next update
---Katie
xoxoxoxo


Author Reply: I'm so glad you're liking this! Frodo is my favorite too (if you couldn't tell all ready *grins*) I do the same POV in "The Latter Days" which I started before this story, but it's supposed to be the sequal to this one. Thank you so much for reviewing! I will update as soon as I can!
God bless and Merry Christmas!
Ellie

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/16/2006
Sorry about that, I don't know what happened. I was going to say I can understand Frodo's dread of those clothes and the nightmarish quality they would have for him. *hugs Frodo and Sam* And I can't wait for them to meet the king! Won't they be surprised! :)
God bless,
Galadriel

Author Reply: I'm so glad you like it!!! *grins* That's the next chapter! I don't have it quite finished, but it will be up soon! *bounces* That's my favorite part!
God bless and Merry Christmas!
Ellie

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/16/2006
I love it, I love it! The angst mingled sweetly with the comfort, the teasing. But poor Frodo, I can understand his dread of those clothes, not just because they were Orc gear

AntaneReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/16/2006
No, I don't think the Gaffer or anyone else would understand about Sam bossing his master around, but Frodo does and that's all that's important. Sam ever knows what is best for his master-brother-child. You've already shown in Latter Days that he has no qualms about showing in public how much he treasures his dearest. The rest of them are just going to have to adjust. :) But it would be horrible to have to wear those rags again. Ick.

Namarie, God bless, Antane

Author Reply: *grins* Yep, the world will have to figure out how to handle them. They are much different than when they left. I read that part in ROTK and I was very surprised that they had to wear those clothes again! I started wondering how Frodo would feel about that, and well...this chapter came out of it! Merry Christmas mellon nin!
God bless,
Ellie

Arwen of LorienReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/15/2006
Ohh! Those Gondorians really shoulda thought to leave our poor hobbits some better
clothes!! *Is revengeful* lol Jk, Great new chap!
I love Sam in this chapter..*No sir, it ain't!!* Teehee!
God bless ~Arwen

Author Reply: Yeah, I know, they've got that whole giant city and they can't leave a hobbit something nice to wear! *grins at revengeful elf* OH, I'm so glad you liked it!! God bless, and Merry Christmas, mellon nin!
Ellie

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/15/2006
This is coming on nicely Elanor. The bond between Sam and Frodo has changed and they both recognise it but it is Frodo that is able to look further ahead.

Btw - small niggle - the door on a tent is often called a flap and it is very hard to knock on. But it is only a very small niggle. *g*

Author Reply: *blushes again* *looks down at Larner's review* Erm, yeah, I forgot that. *rushes off to change it* Glad you liked it anyhow!
God bless,
Ellie

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/14/2006
Okay--they have a door to the tent to knock upon? Now, that is one small glitch in an otherwise lovely story. I'm always glad when they awaken and each realizes the other is still alive.

Author Reply: *blushes* I am so very absentminded sometimes! I forgot it was a tent!!! *rolls eyes and laughs at self* When I have a moment, I shall go fix that... I'm glad you liked it otherwise!
God bless,
Ellie

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/14/2006
“I’m just so happy to see you smile again. I didn’t think I’d ever see that again.”

I am my own once more.


Eeee, how healing and wonderful this is!

Author Reply: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it!
God bless,
Ellie

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