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Remembering Anew  by Pearl Took 6 Review(s)
Grey WondererReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/6/2007
Jebbin is wonderful! I do enjoy him a great deal. His thoughts on Pippin as a meddling ghost are too funny! Marjy is great too. I like her scholarly ways and she reminds me ever so slightly of Frodo in that. Any Baggins in that one? I am enjoying this very much and glad to have had time to begin it. I will be back later in the day for more of this one!

Author Reply: Thank you, GW! It's grand to have you along on this ride. It will, I'm feart, be a dark story, though I'm hoping to find moments of humor as well. I really know so little about what is going to happen in this one.

She might have some Baggins at that, I'll see what the muse says ;-)

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/6/2006
I'm sitting here cringing...and sitting on the edge of my seat somewhat patiently waiting for the next chapter. ;-) Somehow, I get the feeling that the "rough road ahead of them" will be an understatement, lol. I'm looking forward to more!

Pippinfan

Author Reply: Thank you, m'dear for coming along for the ride :-)

I think it is going to be rough but I don't know much myself yet. This is being one of those stories that I'm having to claw for. The next chapter has been started though :-)

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/2/2006
They truly found the right ones for them. So, this is about Jebbins and Other, then? They must be VERY unpopular right now. Nice start.

And he doesn't realize just how much folk in our time will come to love that interfering old ghost, does he? Heh!

Author Reply: Yes, though eveyone's favorite ghosts will definitely be part of the tale, this is more of Jebbin and Other's story. They will be very unpopular soon, poor lads. No, Jebbin has no idea that large numbers of Big Folk will adore that interfering old ghost . . . LOL!

Thank you, Larner, for reding and responding :-)

AndreaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/2/2006
Please submit my greetings to your muse, and tell her (or him) that I would really appreciate it, if that "Master" of Buckland was visited by the ghosts of Meriadoc and Peregrin! He may not be Scrooge, but he really deserves it ;-)

Other and Jebbin have just started their "quest". It will be very different from Merry's and Pippin's, but they will be supported by their wives, who are both fascinating hobbit lasses - and (mostly) Tooks. This is going to be very interesting! I'm looking forward to reading more!

Author Reply: Thank you for reading and responding, Andrea :-)

I'm not sure if or when the ghosties will visit Macimas II. The impressions I have thus far are that, if they do, it will be later in the story not sooner - but we'll see what happens. Seeing as the story is now at a time when Jebbin hasn't even written his book, there's no need for ghostly visits to the Master at this time. But the ghosties will be in the story, I promise :-)

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/2/2006
And, as the prologue indicates, it is indeed going to be tough. You don't crack through engrained prejudices without banging your head against a lot of brick walls. And enduring even more shunning and persecution.

That narrow-minded pompous excuse for a rule-bound Brandybuck doesn't seem to have much in common with his Magnificent ancestor. I hope a certain couple of hobbits are able to come back and haunt him.

This looks very interesting!

Author Reply: Well, don't forget Lalia the Great (Fat), She was quite pompous. And Lobelia and Lotho were as well I'm sure when they ruled the Shire.

I'm glad it looks interesting :) I'm not sure whom those two spirits may visit, but they will be putting in appearances :-)

Thank you, Bodkin!

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/1/2006
Oh goodness, Pearl! You're going to write it--or, well, I guess you *have*, as you are posting it!

Now I'm all a-dither, and wondering how the easy-going Brandybucks and the spirited Tooks managed to devolve into these rather stuffy and pompous excuses for hobbits. They most certainly need something to shake them up!

But I have a feeling that in some ways Jebbin and Other may have a harder Quest to accomplish than Merry and Pippin did. (Not harder than Frodo did, certainly, but harder than his companions.) It may not be as physically dangerous, but it looks as though it will certainly be as dangerous in other ways if the Master of Buckland thinks he has the authority to order parents to disown their own children! Why, I can't imagine anything *less* hobbity! I hope perhaps *he* may be haunted by the shades of his illustrious ancestors--kind of like Scrooge was!

Author Reply: Well . . . ah . . . "have" is too strong a word as I'm feart to say that at this time this is all that is written. Very unlike me as I usually wait till I have about 5 chapters ready to go before I start posting longer stories, that way I have a cushion. But whether it's the mood I'm in or the story itself - this one kept niggling to be posted. I'm not even quite shure what is coming next. This is a story that I'm having to wrestle away from my muse, she (he?) isn't giving it up easily.

I think there had been stuffy, pompous Masters and Thains all along the way. We Know Lalia was a pain for certain. And hobbits in general can go bad, think Lobelia, Lotho, Ted Sandyman. Wealth and power have a tendancy to do that. Macimas II is a bad'un.

Both you and Bodkin mention him needing a visit from certain forebears . . .
That has gotten sent along to the muse, we'll see what comes of it :-) They definitely *will* be in the story though :-)

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