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Elladan and Elrohir's Not So Excellent Adventure  by Fiondil 8 Review(s)
cre8iveovadoseReviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/31/2021
oh Elrond had me in fits of laughter at the end there 😂 can't wait to see what happens!

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/30/2006
This is going to seem a very long journey for Thandir and Eluwen - a very, very long journey!

The results of the journey are likely to seem very long for Elladan and Elrohir - they have aroused the wrath of some very formidable elves.

Author Reply: You think so? *grin*. I suspect, though, that in comparison to some of their scouting assignments, Thandir and Eluwen would consider this "light duty". As for the Twins.... I definitely wouldn't want to be in their shoes when "adar" catches up with them.

ViresseReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/28/2006
I like actions and I like this story with lots of those. Elrond will wait for the twins in Lorien, that means he still trust his twins ability to arrive Lorien save. Or...he trust the guides instead?! Please update soon.

Author Reply: Glad you are enjoying the story. As to just how much Elrond trusts his sons... or the guides... remains to be seen. I plan to update on a regular basis, every other day or so until the story is complete. You won't have long to wait between chapters, I promise.

Idril CelebrindalReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/27/2006
Once again you have me laughing and thoroughly enjoying the (mis)adventures of the Twins. I am glad that you are able to give us another traveling story. I am enjoying this one as much as Tād Edhel a Firion!

I can't wait to read about the look on the twin's faces when they see their father waiting for them!

Author Reply: Glad you are enjoying the story, Idril. I enjoyed writing this story as much as I enjoyed writing "Tād Edhel a Firion" (if not more so). I guess having traveled a bit myself I can appreciate how people can "fall" into (mis)adventures quite easily and unintentionally.

Calenlass GreenleafReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/27/2006
The twins are in for it...
I hate to think what Elrond would do to them....
:-P

Author Reply: Probably what every parent has ever done: give them what for and then hold them close as if he never wants to let them go. At least, if I had any children, that's what I would do....

SurgicalSteelReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/27/2006
Wow - they did get into a lot of trouble rather quickly, didn't they?

Author Reply: Well what do you expect from the sons of Elrond? They may think they're grown up but they're really a long ways away from it still. And trouble seems to be their middle names anyway.

eliza61Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/27/2006
Fiondil,
That was hilarious. Do me a favor, lock El & El in a room for the next century (or two) please. I would ask how is it possible for two people to get into so much trouble in so short time but unfortunately I already know.

Thindir and Eluwen are going to be ready to sail after this.
Until next time, your fan

Eliza

Author Reply: I did have a lot of fun writing the scene with the bear cub and could see the twins running along the ridge with the cub after them so clearly. I was laughing myself even as I was writing it. And the scouts will probably think long and hard before they ever except another such assignment as this one is turning out to be.

BMReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/26/2006
this is great! I can't wait to see what happens next! the poor scouts, though. I wonder what they'll have to say to Elrond when they get to Lorien? Or what the twins will say? Or Elrond himself? I'm sure Galadriel will find the whole thing completely amusing, though......Of course, that is, if Elrond can make it to Lorien without incident himself. He IS their father, after all......hmmmmm. Will Glorfindel be going along as well? :D Please, hurry with the next chapter!

Author Reply: Glad you're enjoying the story. Yes, Elrond is indeed their father and you will have to wait and see what, if anything, happens to him along the way. And you know Elrond can't go anywhere without Glorfindel tagging along *grin*. The story is completely written and I am posting chapters as my schedule allows, though I suspect it will be completely posted within the next week or wo, so just hang in there.

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