| Gaining Trust by Misty | 3 Review(s) |
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| grumpy | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/17/2006 |
| I enjoyed your story about Sam and Aragorn's conversation, that Sam did not trust Aragorn right away, but does trust him now. |
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| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/14/2006 |
This is lovely Misty and I enjoyed it a lot. I have always thought that Sam and Strider might have such a conversation somewhere along the way.
If I, as a non-author, might be so bold, you could develop this further by giving us some more of the internal reactions of the characters to each others comments. For example, I would love to know how Aragorn feels about the fact that Sam now trusts him with Frodo's very life. Just a thought! |
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| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/13/2006 |
| That's a nice scene. I can imagine Sam feeling badly about that! |
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