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Little Lad Lost  by Citrine 5 Review(s)
demeter dReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/13/2006
Ohhhh, ohhhh, dear! Very nice characterization of Lobelia. After all, she was a mother herself, even the lotheable Lotho had to have been young once.I like the description of her grasping her umbrella and preparing to meet the "danger.
An involving beginning. Do go on!

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/12/2006
Still no time to read this properly, but I took the liberty of nominating it for MEFAs. The deadline is coming up quickly, no time for niceties. Hope that's ok.

Author Reply: It's okay:o)Hope it can sneak in under the wire! Yipes, I guess I better get crackin' and get this thing all the way done and posted, lol. Thanks, Lin.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/12/2006
That the mysterious naked infant should prove to be little Pippin is so appropriate! Love it, and that even Lobelia is moved to do the right thing--for the moment, at least! Dear Pippin!

Author Reply: Yes, I've never been able to see Lobelia in a completely bad light. She's not such a bad old girl.(Cranky and bossy and bitter, and with a bad case of sticky-fingers when it comes to Bilbo' silver spoons, but not so bad;o) Thanks for reading, Larner.

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/12/2006
Hoorah, you're writing again!

*tosses handful of confetti in air*
*looks ruefully at floor*
*O well, it needed sweeping anyhow*

Even though I skimmed at top speed (have to be out the door in 30 seconds or so) I laughed out loud at one point. No, more than one. Excellent story!

Lovely portrayal of Lobelia.

Author Reply: *Sweeps up for you*

Thanks again, Lin!

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 6/12/2006
Ooh this is shaping up to be a good tale, if not a little alarming for both Pippin AND Lobelia! Looking forward to more.

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