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| Frodo's Exciting Day Out by Llinos | 4 Review(s) |
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| MarigoldG | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/22/2006 |
| Once again this chapter has some great dialogue! Gems like: "Well Sam," Frodo began gently, "I don't really want you to pick It up, but you are welcome to keep me company." and "Well Sam," Frodo sighed, "it's just you and me then. May the others find a safe road! Strider will look after them. I don't suppose we will see them again." "Yet we may, Mr Frodo. We may," said Sam. "Besides, you've invited Merry and Pippin to come over for their tea this evening and I've never known them to miss that!" And as always your Gollum voice is spot on! | |
| GamgeeFest | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/17/2006 |
| Oh yes! You must have elevenses before attempting to save the world. Don't the Big People know anything? :) And I'm not a fan of Gollum by a long shot, but I can't wait to see what you do with him here! A marvellous introduction. I loved this part best: "Oh before you go," Galadriel clapped her hand to her head in sudden remembrance, "something I had to tell you. You've been promoted." "Really?" Gandalf's face broke into a wide grin, "I was hoping for something soon, but thought I'd have to die or kill something big first." ROTF! This is all so tongue-in-cheek! I love it!! Author Reply: Hello GamgeeFest How can you not be a Gollum fan? He's cute, hairless, skinny, ugly, cheating, malevolent and.. and.. oh yes I see. Oh well. Glad you're liking it, my tongue is so far in my cheek I frequently bite it, and many people say that is a good thing! Llinos | |
| SurgicalSteel | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/12/2006 |
| "We're over the baggage allowance???" *giggle* This was exactly what I needed this morning. *snicker* Author Reply: Hi again Surgical, Now you wouldn't have said that if you'd been at the airport! Llinos PS Thanks for reviewing - it's nice to know real people are out there! | |
| Envinyatar | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 6/12/2006 |
| Fiendishly clever and very funny. I loved the 'staff promotion'! Author Reply: Hi Envinyatar Well it's always good to get a legup from the inside! Glad you like it too! Llinos. | |