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Changing the Past  by Misty 4 Review(s)
Anne RoseReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 12/29/2006
So, I just read your fic, and I must say I'm terribly depressed, angsty, and have a strong urge to beat you with a large stick. *sigh* What a mess they're all in now. And no real way to go forwards or backwards.

I've never seen a time travel/second chance plot handled this way before. And I've read a ton of fic. The story always leaves the traveller behind and goes on to look at other things, as if they were doing just great in the past and didn't matter anymore. Or the traveller poofs out of existance or back to their own time as soon as the situation is changed in the past.

What on earth is Aragorn going to do when he meets Arwen? And we can't have 3 different timelines coexisting, can we? I would hope these would merge in some pleasant way before anything too horrific happens. Or maybe they won't and at least the 3 stranded brothers all know where the ring is and could destroy it before Sauron figures out what's up. Unless he's behind all this.

And that brings us back to the very large stick. I do hope this will be updated soon.

- Anne Rose

FireReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 6/5/2006
WOW, what a take of point. you sure know how to get someones attention.
I wonder who the person is that send them back. And who Aragorn will be.

Author Reply: I'm glad it caught your attention. Some of your questions will be answered soon, while others will have to wait for awhile. ;-) I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 6/4/2006
What an intriguing start. I'm curious about the mysterious person who decided so arbitrarily to send them all back, though. Why? To what purpose?

Looking forward to more!

Jay

Author Reply: I'm glad this caught your interest. The answers to that question won't come for some time yet, however. Many things must happen before that is revealed.

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 6/3/2006
Ooh, great if dangerous start Misty - looking forward to more.

Author Reply: Thank you. I have many things planned for this story. ;-)

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