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| Burning by Salsify | 2 Review(s) |
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| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/22/2007 |
| I was a little surprised that Denethor sounded so 'sane' - but I very much liked what you did with him... I agree totally with your assessment, if I read this right, of why Denethor chose this path for himself and his youngest. Very good writing! Author Reply: Thanks! His plans probably seemed perfectly rational and appropriate to him, though everyone who had to deal with him was more than likely scared out of their wits. | |
| Sphinx | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/24/2003 |
| Very well written. You dont fall into the tarp of making denethor sound like a madman like most authors do, and this made the piece so much more effective. I particularly liked the part where you describe the marks of the scholar fading and the marks of a warrior replacing them. Good work! | |