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Feud  by Misty 2 Review(s)
harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/12/2006
Oh I hope this isn't a one-off as it is a great start. It was very reckless but it did save the man's life.

Author Reply: I'm glad I caught your interest with this. Yes, Rumen was a bit reckless, but he's still young and didn't see another choice.

Arwen of LorienReviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/11/2006
Ohh, can't wait to see more of this story!!
I like Rumen, how young did you make the brave ranger? If you would call it bravery, still, putting yourself on the line for another is a great deed!
-like a raging river ready to burst through a dam- I like that!
What has put this town so? I know I will find answers soon enough, you write so well so quickly!
God bless! ~Arwen

Author Reply: Thanks, I'll have the next chapter up tomorrow. I'll tell you the secret as to how I can post so quickly. (I have the story written first, and then post each chapter. Shhh, but don't tell anyone.) ;-)

I think Rumen would be in his early 20's, though I never specified his age. I'm glad you like the metaphor. Somehow, 'like a ticking time bomb' just didn't seem appropriate to the time of the story, so I had to find something new. As to what is going on in the town, that will unfold as the story develops.

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